The chart below shows global sales of the top five mobile phone brands between 2009 and 2013. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below.

The table clarifies the international purchase of the best five modern telephones between 2009 and 2013.

Overall

, we notice from the chart that

Samsung

and Apple have the highest

sales

compared to other businesses.

Firstly

, the figures indicate that the movement of mobile

sales

flourished in 2009.

For example

, the

Nokia

sales

target reached 443

million

while

Samsung

reached 223

million

.

Furthermore

, in 2011 some

companies

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profits were reduced;

in contrast

, others achieved high income.

For example

, the proportion of people who have

Samsung

phones increased to 333

million

compared to 223 in 2009,

while

individuals who have

Nokia

mobiles slightly reduced to 441 in 2011. In 2013, there was a drastic decrease in

Nokia

sales

;

however

, the

sales

in

Samsung

witnessed moderate changes.

For example

, the percentage of

sales

in

Nokia

dropped to 222

million

;

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whereas

,

in

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Samsung

jumped to 445

million

. We notice from the statistics that

Samsung

has been more demanding in recent years than other companies.