In a number of countries some people think it is necessary to spend large sums of money on constructing high speed railway lines for inter-city travel. Others believe this money should be spent on improving existing public transport. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

There is no doubt that developing street construction and public transport plays an effective role in the Progress of the country.

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necessary to prove the improvement of the country . Which one of those views is more important ?

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and how can we improve it ?

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First,

constructing

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railway is the first thing that visitors from the world will see when they visit the country, so it is worth investing in . Mainly, it will be

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first impression

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of how is the nation progressing. As an example, boosting local businesses with all roads to attract commuters and tourists.

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, they make the way between cities more convenient and

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cut down travel time.

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public transport system can be more cost-effective than constructing a new highway.

However

, public transport can save the environment by reducing carbon emissions.

Also

, modernizing improves the service frequency that the serving.

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. In my opinion,

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of them have the same consideration, As

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benefits.