The maps show improvements that have been made to a university campus between 2006 and the present day. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The maps illustrate changes in the
university
campus area in the year 2006 and the present.
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Overall
, the number of Linking Words
student
accommodations has increased, Use synonyms
also
the expansion of the Art and Science Faculty buildings. Linking Words
In contrast
, the park that surrounded the Linking Words
lake
in the middle of the campus has disappeared, Use synonyms
along with
the restaurants, shops, and Linking Words
university
office buildings.
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Firstly
, the Linking Words
student
dormitories used to be located separately on the southwest side and across the street from the Use synonyms
lake
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,
Remove the comma
apply
then
Linking Words
has
developed into two buildings across the street and replaced the restaurant and shops as a single building on the southeast. There are Unnecessary verb
apply
also
changes on the teaching block, Linking Words
Art
and Science faculty used to Correct article usage
The Art
located
in the same single block which turned into two separate complexes with the science faculty Add a missing verb
be located
replaced
the Wrong verb form
replacing
university
office with the new construction.
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In addition
, the new Linking Words
student
facility complex was built on the southwest area of the Use synonyms
lake
that used to be the Use synonyms
student
accommodation. The new complex consists of the Use synonyms
university
offices, Use synonyms
restaurant
and shops in the same building. Fix the agreement mistake
restaurants
Furthermore
, the seating area around the Linking Words
lake
was Use synonyms
also
removed.Linking Words
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words university, student, lake with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
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