The maps show improvements that have been made to a university campus between 2006 and the present day. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The maps illustrate changes in the
university
campus area in the year 2006 and the present.
Overall
, the number of student
accommodations has increased, also
the expansion of the Art and Science Faculty buildings. In contrast
, the park that surrounded the lake
in the middle of the campus has disappeared, along with
the restaurants, shops, and university
office buildings.
Firstly
, the student
dormitories used to be located separately on the southwest side and across the street from the lake
,
Remove the comma
apply
then
has
developed into two buildings across the street and replaced the restaurant and shops as a single building on the southeast. There are Unnecessary verb
apply
also
changes on the teaching block, Art
and Science faculty used to Correct article usage
The Art
located
in the same single block which turned into two separate complexes with the science faculty Add a missing verb
be located
replaced
the Wrong verb form
replacing
university
office with the new construction.
In addition
, the new student
facility complex was built on the southwest area of the lake
that used to be the student
accommodation. The new complex consists of the university
offices, restaurant
and shops in the same building. Fix the agreement mistake
restaurants
Furthermore
, the seating area around the lake
was also
removed.Submitted by pimpisut.sata on
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