The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now

The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now
The diagram depicts the evolution in the floor plan of the Central Library, illustrating both its former and current configurations.
Overall
, the Central Library has been significantly
remodeled
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, now featuring a café, advanced self-service kiosks, and areas designated for community engagement. Previously, an enquiry desk welcomed visitors to the right of the entrance;
this
space now houses a café, enhancing the library’s communal offerings. The central area, once occupied by tables and chairs, now features
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sofas, creating an inviting space for storytelling events, with
children’s
fiction
books
within easy reach. The
room
with sofas now has an area dedicated
for
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storytelling events,
along with
children’s
fiction
books
. The former
children’s
fiction
books
area has been transformed into a lecture
room
, with all reference
books
now situated between the computer
room
and the
children’s
fiction
books
.
In addition
to the
room
utilization, the positioning of doors has
also
been modified, as the diagram illustrates. Particularly noteworthy is the relocation of the computer
room
's entrance; previously facing the
children’s
section, it has been repositioned to open onto the main corridor, facilitating better access for library patrons.
Furthermore
, the construction of the café has been accompanied by the addition of a new entrance, streamlining the flow of foot traffic.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • floor plan
  • layout
  • shelving
  • reading area
  • reference section
  • encyclopedias
  • dictionaries
  • circulation desk
  • transactions
  • digital media
  • computer stations
  • multimedia rooms
  • café area
  • social environment
  • leisure-friendly
  • expanded reading areas
  • user experience
  • comfortable seating
  • children's section
  • engage younger readers
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