The diagram below illustrates the carbon cycle in nature.
The picture shows how carbon dioxide is created in nature.
Overall
, there are two core stages which start with CO2 transmission into the atmosphere and end with the CO2 consumption Linking Words
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underground.
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Initially
, the carbon dioxide produced from animal and plant respiration spreads into the air and forms clouds. Linking Words
Besides
, some CO2 sources are from the emissions of factories.
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the photosynthesis Linking Words
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is progressing, many CO2 molecules are consumed by plants. Use synonyms
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, CO2 is supplied to Linking Words
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animal corpses and green waste can be transformed into fossils and fossil energy Linking Words
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CO2 and brine effects, the other participates in the lifespan of nitrogen bacteria to make nutrients for soil and plants. Simultaneously, some of the nutrients, which are made from the decomposition, are absorbed by the roots of trees in a Linking Words
process
called root respiration. Ultimately, The Use synonyms
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ends with the spreading of carbon dioxide by respiration activity and repeats the operation again.Use synonyms
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