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The line chart below shows the effect of vaccination on the number of reported cases of whooping cough, a childhood disease, in Britain.

The line chart below shows the effect of vaccination on the number of reported cases of whooping cough, a childhood disease, in Britain.
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The chart illustrates the impact of immunization on several reported
cases
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 of whooping cough, which only affects children in Britain from 1940 to 2010.
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, it can be clearly seen that the total number of
cases
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 that were reported significantly fell right after the vaccination began.
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, the
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 1941 recorded about 57,000
cases
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 of infection, and
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 quickly skyrocketed to approximately 178,000
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 the following
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. Surprisingly, the reported number of whooping cough
cases
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 fell right down to about 68,000
cases
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 in 1943. These
cases
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 kept rising and falling each
year
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 until the
year
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 1957.
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, the whooping cough vaccination was introduced in
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1957 after which the number of reported
cases
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 fell from about 90,000 to about 5,000
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 in 1976. Afterwards, it rose again the
year
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 after to about 63,000
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 and another 63,000
cases
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 in 1982 before gradually falling down. The country reported zero
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 after the
year
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 2000. The vaccine intake began at 81%,
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 fell to 30%, and eventually increased to 94%.
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