The chart shows British emigration to selected destination between 2004 and 2007.

Information on the British emigration to various regions is illustrated by the bar chart. The data varies among 5 countries for the period from 2004 to 2007. The units are measured in thousands.

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, it is apparently seen that the most desirable place was Australia during the whole period, being the only category that showed an upward trend. As for the other regions, their indexes decreased over

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time. Looking at the details, Australia’s figure started at roughly 42, being the biggest of all in 2004. Having fallen slightly to just under 40 in 2005, the ratio rocketed to over 50 in 2006, and it

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dropped to around 43 in 2007. As for Spain, the figure witnessed a negligible rise from 33 to 34 in the first two years,

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two years to 32 and 28 respectively. New Zealand’s proportion experienced a stable decrease in it from 23 to 20 year on year. The index for the USA fluctuated between 24 and 20 within the survey,

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for France there was a boom from 22 to 34 in 2004 and 2005,

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point, the rate had dived to almost 18 in 2007, taking the lowest ratio among 5.