The charts below show the number of working hours per week, in industrial sector, in four European countries in 2002. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons with relevant.

The charts below show the number of working hours per week, in industrial sector, in

four European countries in 2002. Summarize the information by selecting and

reporting the main features and make comparisons with relevant.
The charts illustrate the percentage of manpower and their working
hours
per
week
in the industrial sector of two different European countries in the year 2002.
According to
France industrial
work
statistics-2002, 50 per cent of people
work
between 31-35
hours
per
week
and 35
percent
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of men and women spend their time in the office is about 36-40
Hours
per seven days. On the other side, there are
few
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a few
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10%
professionals
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of professionals
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limited
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limit
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their working
hours
an
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to an
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average of 20
hours
out 168
hours
of time. Shockingly, there are very rare workers who
allocated
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businness
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business
hours
up to 50 +
hours
per
week
.
Whereas
in Denmark, the industrial data shows almost 70% of manpower works 6
hours
per day and 36-40
hours
per
week
. 0-10% of people
work
for 30
hours
and 50+
hours
as well on a weekly basis.
Overall
, France people are dedicated to their
work
when compared to Denmark citizens to develop
the
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industrialisation.
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