The pie charts below show the revenue from 5 industries in Togo in 2000 and projections for 2050.
There are two figures illustrating the
income
from 5 manufacturers in Togo in 2000 and predictions for 2050.
Overall
, the soft beverages industry
, information services, and semiconductor industry
had important roles in bringing revenue in 2000 and they have a projection not only to increase total income
but also
to devote a massive proportion of income
to the semiconductor industry
in 2050.
In 2000, the total earnings of Togo were $97 billion
with information services and soft beverages having the largest equal amount at $25, real estate development with $20 was the second-highest income
. In addition
, the semiconductor industry
and life insurance with $15 and $12 were the last
segments respectively.
The calculations for 2050, the prediction for entire revenue will be $196 billion
and also
semiconductors will be $126 billion
. The rest of the proportions consist of the soft beverages industry
and real estate development with $25 and both Information and life insurance with $10 billion
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