The pie charts below show the revenue from 5 industries in Togo in 2000 and projections for 2050.

The pie charts below show the revenue from 5 industries in Togo in 2000 and projections for 2050.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The pie charts below show the revenue from 5 industries in Togo in 2000 and projections for 2050.
There are two figures illustrating the
income
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from 5 manufacturers in Togo in 2000 and predictions for 2050.
Overall
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, the soft beverages
industry
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, information services, and semiconductor
industry
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had important roles in bringing revenue in 2000 and they have a projection not only to increase total
income
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but
also
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to devote a massive proportion of
income
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to the semiconductor
industry
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in 2050. In 2000, the total earnings of Togo were $97
billion
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with information services and soft beverages having the largest equal amount at $25, real estate development with $20 was the second-highest
income
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.
In addition
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, the semiconductor
industry
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and life insurance with $15 and $12 were the
last
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segments respectively. The calculations for 2050, the prediction for entire revenue will be $196
billion
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and
also
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semiconductors will be $126
billion
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. The rest of the proportions consist of the soft beverages
industry
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and real estate development with $25 and both Information and life insurance with $10
billion
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.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words income, industry, billion with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "information" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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