In many countries today, crime novels and TV dramas are becoming more and more popular? Why do you think these books and TV shows are popular? What is your opinion of crime fiction and TV crime dramas?
In contemporary days,
crime
novels
and TV
dramas
are becoming more popular in the majority of the
countries. Correct article usage
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Firstly
, this
essay will discuss the reason
why these books and TV
shows are becoming popular. Following that it
will discuss my opinion on Correct pronoun usage
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crime
fiction and TV
crime
dramas
.
The majority of the
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people
are attracted towards watching TV
dramas
and reading crime
novel
. The main Fix the agreement mistake
novels
reason
behind this
is development
of technology and Add an article
the development
a development
people
's intrest
towards watching these Correct your spelling
interest
dramas
and novels
. A decade ago, if a person
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wanted
then
the only source of gathering information was through newspaper
which had a Fix the agreement mistake
newspapers
lot
of censorship. But nowadays there is
a Correct subject-verb agreement
are
lot
of news channels as well as
internet
to enhance a Add an article
the internet
person
's knowledge on
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a particular news
. Remove the article
particular news
a piece of particular news
Due to
this
, he/she is able to gather information about any sort of news very easily. This
is one of the reasons that attract people
towards watching crime
novels
and TV
dramas
. And other main reason
is the
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that
crime
novels
and TV
shows are making a person
more occupied and create an urge to watch them immediately. These are the main reason
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reasons
it
popularity.
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According to
my opinion, people
should limit themselves on
watching these Change preposition
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crime
fiction and TV
crime
dramas
. Because it triggers the readers to pretend as
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a
same character that he/ she read in the book or seen in a show. The best example Correct article usage
the
for
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of
this
scenario will be
the recent Wrong verb form
is
crime
that was
happened in my country. A young boy has killed his friend because he did not like his attitude. After Unnecessary verb
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investigation
they came to know that he Add a comma
investigation,
have
read a Change the form of the verb
had
lot
of crime
novel
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novels
Although
these kinds of TV
shows and novel
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novels
person
to spend his leisure time, it also
redirects him/her in a negative direction.
In conclusion, even though these shows and books are becoming more popular, it
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they
also
creates
a Correct subject-verb agreement
create
lot
of negative impact
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impacts
among
the citizens Change preposition
on
in
a country. Government or Change preposition
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journels
should publish only the appropriate information among Correct your spelling
journals
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as well as
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While you have a clear structure with an introduction, body, and conclusion, the internal coherence could be improved. Ensure each paragraph flows smoothly to the next and create clearer topic sentences for each paragraph.
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Some sentences are awkward or unclear. For example, 'The majority of the people are attracted towards watching TV dramas and reading crime novel.' Consider revising for clarity and grammatical accuracy. Additionally, try using more varied vocabulary and sentence structures.
coherence cohesion
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task achievement
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task achievement
You address both parts of the prompt by discussing why crime novels and TV dramas are popular and sharing your own opinion on the matter.
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