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The table below provides statistics on several major metro (MRT) systems around the world.

The table below provides statistics on several major metro (MRT) systems around the world.
The table illustrates data on various major metro systems around the world. It includes the cities with MRT (Mass Rapid Transit) systems, their years of completion, total lengths, and capacities to carry people in millions.
Overall
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, Tokyo and
Paris
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 dominate among their peer cities.
Although
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 Tokyo's system is shorter in
length
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 compared to others, its efficiency in handling passenger volume stands out as the highest among all.
Paris
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 follows with the
second highest
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 carrying
capacity
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 of 850
million
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 people.
According to
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 the information provided, London has the largest metro system, stretching 1,100
km
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 in
length
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, followed by
Paris
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 with 594
km
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.
However
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,
Paris
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 is more efficient than London, which has a
capacity
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 of only 548
million
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 passengers. The recently constructed metro system in 2001 spans just 14
km
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 and has a
capacity
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 of 90
million
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 passengers.
Furthermore
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, Kyoto shows a similar trend with an 11
km
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length
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 and the same carrying
capacity
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. Washington DC, constructed in 1921, has a carrying
capacity
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 of 70
million
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 people and a
length
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 of 114
km
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.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words paris, length, capacity, million, km with synonyms.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • ridership
  • infrastructure
  • urban planning
  • expansion
  • economical impact
  • safety measures
  • technology integration
  • comparison
  • statistics
  • efficiency
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