scientists agree that many people eat too much junk food and it is damaging their health. some people think that this problem can be solved by educating people, while others believe that education will not work. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

Whether educating

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about the effects of fast

food

on one's physical health

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scientists have identified or using other efficient methods is a highly effective discussion point.

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, from

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prior experience, it is

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better to teach the public about the

hazard

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that these foods cause, despite

of

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those who believe that

this

way will not

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. It must be recognized that an excess of fat, sugar or calories when

consume

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fast

food

can lead to overweight, especially for those who lead a relatively inactive lifestyle.

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, the impacts of saturated fat,

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sugar were very toxic and should be prevented.

This

is because eating too much unhealthy

food

can result in heart

diseases

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and high blood pressure.

However

, not many people notice that information and will ignore it, and governments could deal with

this

problem by increasing the price of

food

that

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too

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fat. It can

also

be observed that fewer people can afford to purchase these products. In recent years, individuals and families have been under significant financial pressure,

due to

rising

food

and energy prices globally and the demand for cheaper and possibly healthier alternatives.

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, the rise

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food

prices can cause

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between companies and governments

due to

higher taxes. From

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writer’s experience,

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are

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better

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have a healthier lifestyle. They could pay attention

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the nutrition of

food

to ensure the amount of necessary things to prevent obesity. A personal example is limiting the consumption of fast

food

and

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more exercise to enhance

the

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physical health. In conclusion, there are better to educate

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about junk

food

, as there are benefits for people to recognize the nutrition that these foods contain.

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, education is more cost-effective than its increasing in prices of

food

.