The charts below show the number of working hours per week, in industrial sector, in four European countries in 2002. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons with relevant.

The charts below show the number of working hours per week, in industrial sector, in

four European countries in 2002. Summarize the information by selecting and

reporting the main features and make comparisons with relevant.
The line charts below illustrate the amount of time per week, in the industrial sector, in France and Denmark in 2002.
Overall
, it is obvious that the highest working
hours
in France are 31-35
hours
,
while
, in Denmark, it is 36-40
hours
.
Firstly
, France is the place with the lowest working amount of residents. The sum of residents who
work
1-14
hours
is 10%
while
, the percentage of citizens who
work
for 15-20 or 21-30 are above 10%. The rate of
people
who
work
31-35
hours
is the highest proportion in the graph at 50%. The number of
people
who
work
50+
hours
is the same amount as the
people
who
work
1-14
hours
.
In contrast
, in Denmark the
people
who
work
1-14, 15-20, 21-30, 41-45, 46-50 and 50+
hours
is almost the same by 10%,
however
, only the quantity of crowd who
work
31-35 is above 20% and the interest of individuals who
work
36-40
hours
is the highest point in the picture by 70% which is a higher fraction than the highest point in
other graph
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