Many students find it difficult to concentrate or pay attention at school. What are the reasons? What could be done to solve this problem?

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that several

students

encounter difficulty

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at school, others argue that an ineffective teaching style could probably be the key

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this

issue. Both reasons why I agree with the latter statement and solutions contributing to

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controversial topic will be elaborated on in

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essay.

To begin

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lecturers

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the reason why they

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attention

to class.

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because

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generation often

prefer

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more simple,

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concepts rather than a long and dull lesson. Take tutoring school,

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; they always

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with mnemonics and songs related to the concepts they taught which stimulate

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participate and

focus

.

However

,

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opponents of

this

idea might oppose that it is the

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themselves

that cannot

focus

on the lecture

instead

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do not pay

attention

to it at all.

Therefore

, I personally argue in favour of

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tools aspect seeing that

students

have limited concentration

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. To simply explain,

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time of

students

may vary and

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so the teacher should provide a more interesting and

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means of teaching to keep the

attention

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their

students

.

For example

, speed, tone, and intonation of speech do affect

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student

attention

as the slow, calm, and monotonous

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are likely to be ignored by the

student

.

Furthermore

, involving

students

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participation

as well as

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activities to activate them from being isolated. In conclusion,

although

it is undeniable that many

students

cannot keep their

focus

in school

due to

either external

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such

as teaching techniques or internal

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like themselves, I am of the opinion that

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creative ways of study will largely impact

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the interests of the topic in order to create

a better learning strategies

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in academic fields.