The graph below shows the amount and type of fast food consumed by Australian teenagers from 1975 to 2000.
The statistics regarding the types and amount of consumed fast food
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Australian teenagers between the years 1975 and 200 are illustrated in the presented line graph.
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Overall
, the graph starts with a large disparity among the rate of consumption of fish
and chips
and other kinds of fast food, which reverses over time.
Looking into detail, a roughly parallel trend is visible between the annual usage of pizza and hamburgers starting from well under 20 percent
in 1975 and gradually growing to above 80% by the end of the chart, with hamburgers holding a higher rank. The ever-increasing pattern of the mentioned foods, Change the spelling
per cent
however
, is in marked contrast to the figures for fish
and chips
which began with
100%, experienced some fluctuations and fell to just under 40% in 2000.
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two
stages of the graph, the consumption rate of Correct article usage
the two
fish
and chips
meets the two other grpups
of fast food. Correct your spelling
groups
First
being, the equal usage of hamburgers and Add an article
The first
fish
and chips
in 1985, and the second,
with pizza in 1995.Submitted by TUTOO on
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