7.The bar chart gives the top eight online activities in Slovakia in a given month. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where necessary.

7.The bar chart gives the top eight online activities in Slovakia in a given month.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where necessary.
The bar chart provides information about the eight most popular online activities conducted in Slovakia for two
genders
throughout July as a percentage of
overall
internet
users. It can be seen that males and females have the highest usage in
both
text or instant messaging and
using
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email.
On the other hand
,
both
genders
had the least
interested
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in Job Hunting.
According to
the figures, communication-related tasks were the most common, especially using email and texting or instant messaging, which are over 80% of total
internet
users for
both
genders
. For women, the next most popular activity is social networking at around 78%.
In contrast
, for men,
internet
banking at 73% was the second most popular. It can
also
be seen that the ratio of women who use the
internet
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for health research is double that of men.
Furthermore
, females have a higher proportion in most categories, except job hunting, where there are very similar ratios.
To sum up
, it is clear to see that
both
genders
use the
internet
mostly for communication-related tasks,
while
other tasks are less common.
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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words genders, internet, both with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "ratio" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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