7.The bar chart gives the top eight online activities in Slovakia in a given month. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where necessary.
The bar chart provides information about the eight most popular online activities conducted in Slovakia for two
genders
throughout July as a percentage of overall
internet
users.
It can be seen that males and females have the highest usage in both
text or instant messaging and using
email. Verb problem
apply
On the other hand
, both
genders
had the least interested
in Job Hunting.
Replace the word
interest
According to
the figures, communication-related tasks were the most common, especially using email and texting or instant messaging, which are over 80% of total internet
users for both
genders
. For women, the next most popular activity is social networking at around 78%. In contrast
, for men, internet
banking at 73% was the second most popular. It can also
be seen that the ratio of women who use the internet
for health research is double that of men. Capitalize word
Internet
Furthermore
, females have a higher proportion in most categories, except job hunting, where there are very similar ratios.
To sum up
, it is clear to see that both
genders
use the internet
mostly for communication-related tasks, while
other tasks are less common.Submitted by sunnyrogle22 on
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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