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The chart below shows the sales of music albums in Spain between 1980 and 2010.

The chart below shows the sales of music albums in Spain between 1980 and 2010.
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The line graphs show the
sales
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 of
music
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 albums in
Spain
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 between 1980 and 2010. All figures are given in millions.
Firstly
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, it is noticeable that the
sales
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 of ballads increased significantly from less than 1
million
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 to 2.7
million
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 albums in 2010, which was the most popular among other
music
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.
Additionally
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, the
sales
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 of R&B remained stable at around 0.5
million
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 from 1980 to 1995,
then
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 it surged from 0.8
million
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 in 2000 to 1.8
million
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 in 2010.
Furthermore
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, interestingly, the
sales
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 of pop
music
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 were the lowest at the beginning of the period (0.2
million
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),
this
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 figure increased by 1.5
million
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 in 1995
then
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 the figure slightly decreased.
However
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, the
sales
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 of pop
music
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 showed a significant rise from 1
million
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 in 2005 to 2.3
million
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 in 2010, which was the second most popular
music
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 in
Spain
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. It is
also
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 noteworthy that the
sales
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 of rock
music
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 were the highest in 1980 ( 1.5
million
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), but the figure constantly declined throughout the period.
Overall
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, it is seen that
while
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 the
music
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 of ballads and pop became popular
music
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 in
Spain
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,
the
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rock
music
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 became the most unfavourable
music
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 in
Spain
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.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words sales, music, spain, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "show" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "significantly" was used 2 times.
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