The graph below shows a number of tourists visiting a particular carribean island between 2010 and 2017

The figure illustrates the statistics from the year 2010 to 2017 the

number

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of

tourists

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who visited Caribbean

Island

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by residing on cruise ships and on the

island

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. The unit for

visitors

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travelled is in millions. Among the

visitors

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who stayed on the cruise ships, 0.25

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lived in 2010 and 2012 and half a

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in 2011 and 2013. By 2014, the

people

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residing rose to half a

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taking the value to 1

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. From 2014 to 2017, there was an exponential increase in the

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of

visitors

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with every year 0.25

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people adding taking to 2

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by the end of 2017. Among the

visitors

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who lived on the

Island

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, from 2010 to 2011 for 1 year the

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visitors

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population remained

same

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the same

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0.75

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. But, from 2011 to 2013 it rose by a

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. And later on, from 2013 to 2015 the

number

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of

tourists

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remained

same

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of

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about 1.5

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. There was

decline

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a decline

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by 2016 of 0.5

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but, it increased again to 1.5

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by 2017.

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,

to conclude

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in total there was a steady rise in the

number

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of

tourists

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for 5 years and later by 2017 there was a surge of 3.5

million

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tourists

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visiting the

island

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.