The graph below shows a number of tourists visiting a particular carribean island between 2010 and 2017
The figure illustrates the statistics from the year 2010 to 2017 the
number
of tourists
who visited Caribbean Island
by residing on cruise ships and on the island
. The unit for visitors
travelled is in millions.
Among the visitors
who stayed on the cruise ships, 0.25 million
lived in 2010 and 2012 and half a million
in 2011 and 2013. By 2014, the people
residing rose to half a Correct quantifier usage
number of people
million
taking the value to 1 million
. From 2014 to 2017, there was an exponential increase in the number
of visitors
with every year 0.25 million
people adding taking to 2 million
by the end of 2017.
Among the visitors
who lived on the Island
, from 2010 to 2011 for 1 year the visitors
population remained Change to a genitive case
visitor's
visitors'
same
0.75 Correct article usage
the same
million
. But, from 2011 to 2013 it rose by a million
. And later on, from 2013 to 2015 the number
of tourists
remained same
Correct article usage
the same
of
about 1.5 Change preposition
at
million
. There was decline
by 2016 of 0.5 Add an article
a decline
million
but, it increased again to 1.5 million
by 2017.
Therefore
, to conclude
in total there was a steady rise in the number
of tourists
for 5 years and later by 2017 there was a surge of 3.5 million
tourists
visiting the island
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