The map shows the present layout of an post building and plans for its future redevelopment.

The map shows the present layout of an post building and plans for its future redevelopment.
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post building and plans for its future redevelopment. Contained in the blueprints are the data pertaining to potential alternations of a work building. From an observational perspective, the adjacent grass fields will be replaced by new commission facilities.
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, the majority of current infrastructures will be relocated with kitchen and canteen are going to be demolished. Regarding the present place building, the doorway is placed in the bottom corner and next to four work rooms. At the top-right corner, there is a small WCs and a storeroom behind a restroom. Moving onto the top-left corner, a kitchen and a canteen are built in proximity to each other.
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, there are two immense grasslands on both the left and right sides of the building. Turning into the future building, the door will be relocated to the middle of the building, with two enlarged service rooms in the vicinity . On the opposite side of the entrance will be another two expanded room offices and a storeroom from the left to right. There will be a small gate on the right side of the building which leads to the outdoor seating area and a bunch of chairs. On the right-hand side, the grass will reconstructed into a new meeting area with chairs, a coffee machine and a WCs

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