The graph shows population variation in three wildlife species from 2011 to 2016 in North America and its coastal areas. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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the graph provides information concerning the wildlife population in North America and its coastal areas in 6 years from 2011 to 2016, including the
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