You have not seen a close friend for a very long time. You also still have a few of your friend’s belongings that were left at your house the last time she visited. In your letter include: - Why you are writing - What you’ve been doing since you last spoke together - Apologize for still having the items and ask how you can return them Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Dear Sasha,
I hope you are doing well and in good health. It's been a
while
since we saw each other so I am hoping we can plan a trip together. However
, I am writing this
to inform you that I found some of your belongings in my apartment.
Moreover
, I wanted to present you with the good news that I am currently pursuing my dream job. As of last
week, I completed my intern program and started working full-time at Ulta Beauty as a hairdresser. Apart from my job, I started playing Cricket as a hobby in my free time which I am totally loving. I am hoping we can play together when we meet next.
Furthermore
, I apologize for not realising that your items have been with me for this
long. In the near future, I am planning to travel to Seattle and I can drop off your things at your place. If that does not work for you, I can also
mail it to you.
Looking forward to meeting you.
With love,
KP.Submitted by praneeth2094 on
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Coherence and Cohesion
Try to vary your sentence structures to increase the complexity and flow of your writing.
Coherence and Cohesion
Maintain a clear paragraphing style but also explore using a wider range of cohesive devices.
Task Achievement
Keep your tone consistent and consider the audience to ensure appropriateness.
Overview
Your letter successfully addresses all the points in the task with a clear structure and appropriate tone, making it an effective piece of communication.
Greeting and Closing
The closing of the letter is warm and appropriate, reinforcing the friendly relationship.
Logical Structure
Good use of paragraphs, each covering a distinct topic as instructed.
The Closing
The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.
Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,