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The pie charts below show units of electricity production by fuel source in Australia and France in 1980 and 2000

The pie charts below show units of electricity production by fuel source in Australia and France in 1980 and 2000
The pie charts illustrate the sources of
electricity
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 in
Australia
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 and France between 1980 and 2000. Over the period of 20 years, the
electricity
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 production used in
Australia
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 and France has considerably risen from 100
units
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 to 170
units
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 and 90
units
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 to 180
units
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 respectively.
According to
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 the graphs, the coal used in
Australia
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 increased dramatically from 1980 to 2000, growing from 50
units
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 to 130
units
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, which account for 75%, stays in the top position consistently.
However
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, in 1980, natural gas took
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second place in terms of
electricity
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 production with Hydropower, number of 20
units
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. Until 2000, it has not been produced in
this
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 country but a rise was found in the Hydropower to 36
units
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.
In contrast
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, in 2000, the most productive
electricity
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 production in France was Nuclear power, which was not used in
Australia
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, seeing a dramatic growth from 15
units
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 to 126
units
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, producing almost 75% of
electricity
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.
While
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 the amount of Coal and Oil together produced only 50
units
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, just over 25%. Meanwhile, there was
a
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 same trend in these two countries, which is that natural gas has disappeared. In conclusion,
it is clear that
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 by 2000 both two countries relied on various fuel
sourses
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sources
, but
Australia
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 relied on Coal and Hydropower,
whereas
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 Nuclear power was the principal resource.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words electricity, australia, units with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "dramatically" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Electricity production
  • Fuel source
  • Renewable sources
  • Non-renewable sources
  • Significant change
  • Evolved
  • Dominant source
  • Introduction of new sources
  • Reliance
  • Electricity production mix
  • Environmental implications
  • Future trend
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