The table and pie charts below show the number of research students in Australian universities in 2001 and 2010.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given table and pie charts depict the
quantity
of Change the quantifier
number
undergraduates
doing research in Australian universities in 2 different years, 2001 and 2010.
Overall
, it is evident that there was a sharp increase in the number of total research students
in 2010. Furthermore
, the proportion of non-local undergraduates
rose steadily while
that of local students
decreased with
the same degree, despite growing in Change preposition
to
the
quantity.
As can be seen from the table chart, the total number of research Correct article usage
apply
students
soared from 38,849 to 54,081, which
because of the growth in the quantity of local and international Correct pronoun usage
apply
undergraduates
. To be more precise, the data of the former group
recorded at
33,657 in 2001 and climbed to 39,488 Change preposition
apply
students
, while
that
figure of the latter Correct determiner usage
the
group
underwent a nearly three-fold increase, from 5,192 to 14,583.
Turning to the pie chart, it is worth noting that the percentage of male and female students
is similar, 53% and 47% in 2001, 50% and 50% in 2010 respectively. In 2001, the proportion of non-local undergraduates
took up just over one-tenth, whereas
the local group
contributed at 87%. Despite a roughly two-fold rise, the percentage of international students
still accounted for a much lower data compared to the remaining group
, 27% and 73% respectively.Submitted by weezel on
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