The table and pie charts below show the number of research students in Australian universities in 2001 and 2010.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given table and pie charts depict the
quantity
of Change the quantifier
number
undergraduates
doing research in Australian universities in 2 different years, 2001 and 2010.
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Overall
, it is evident that there was a sharp increase in the number of total research Linking Words
students
in 2010. Use synonyms
Furthermore
, the proportion of non-local Linking Words
undergraduates
rose steadily Use synonyms
while
that of local Linking Words
students
decreased Use synonyms
with
the same degree, despite growing in Change preposition
to
the
quantity.
As can be seen from the table chart, the total number of research Correct article usage
apply
students
soared from 38,849 to 54,081, Use synonyms
which
because of the growth in the quantity of local and international Correct pronoun usage
apply
undergraduates
. To be more precise, the data of the former Use synonyms
group
recorded Use synonyms
at
33,657 in 2001 and climbed to 39,488 Change preposition
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students
, Use synonyms
while
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that
figure of the latter Correct determiner usage
the
group
underwent a nearly three-fold increase, from 5,192 to 14,583.
Turning to the pie chart, it is worth noting that the percentage of male and female Use synonyms
students
is similar, 53% and 47% in 2001, 50% and 50% in 2010 respectively. In 2001, the proportion of non-local Use synonyms
undergraduates
took up just over one-tenth, Use synonyms
whereas
the local Linking Words
group
contributed at 87%. Despite a roughly two-fold rise, the percentage of international Use synonyms
students
still accounted for a much lower data compared to the remaining Use synonyms
group
, 27% and 73% respectively.Use synonyms
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