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Recently, you saw an article in the newspaper/journal about a city or town. you know andsome of the information in the article was incorrect. write a letter to the editor regarding this: How you know about this city/town What information was incorrect what the editor should do about this.

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Dear Prashant, I am writing
this
 letter to you regarding
your
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last
 week's article published in the CBC Times newspaper claiming that all town centres across Canada look alike.
Although
 your finding might be correct for other town centres. I would agree with the first half of your post that with urbanization many cities are focusing on building skyscrapers, large factory outlets, and shopping centres which
result
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 in cities looking
copies
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 of each other.
However
, it is not the same for Mississauga, city authorities have carefully planned layout for our area which includes mixed architecture for residential buildings and holds the essence of old architecture,
Mississauaga
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Mississauga
 has multiple museums, and art galleries which showcase the rich past of the city and it
also
 has modern green urban spaces. If you are interested in exploring my city, I would like to arrange a day tour with my brother who works as a tour guide. looking forward to hearing from you. Yours sincerely, Sandeep
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coherence cohesion
Ensure that each paragraph has a clear central idea and flows logically to the next. The letter is good, but the structure could be refined to make the arguments clearer.
task achievement
Avoid minor grammatical errors such as missing articles or slight inaccuracies in phrasing. Proofreading can further enhance the clarity.
coherence cohesion
The greeting and closing are appropriate and courteous, fitting the formal tone of the letter.
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The writing tone is suitable for a formal letter to an editor, maintaining politeness throughout.
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The response is complete and addresses all parts of the task, providing clear details on how you know the city, what information was incorrect, and what should be done.
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