Internet has advantaged and disadvantages .Do you agree or disagree?

The
internet
is like
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library or giant shopping.but it is all on the computer. the
internet
 
give
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us the following
opportinutie
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opportunities
.we share information over the
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. we can communicate with many friends
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though
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the
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. many people are brought
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the
internet
.the
internet
has been a major part of our
life
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since
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Today
people canʼt imagine their life
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.Use the
internet
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coherence cohesion
Your essay lacks an introduction and a conclusion. Make sure to include both to frame your argument and round off your discussion.
task achievement
Focus on developing clear and comprehensive ideas. For instance, elaborate on how the internet serves as a library or how it aids in communication.
task achievement
Your essay addresses both advantages and disadvantages of the internet, which is a good start.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • revolutionized
  • instantaneous communication
  • social media platforms
  • virtual meetings
  • e-commerce
  • global marketplaces
  • streaming services
  • online gaming
  • content creation
  • remote working
  • cyberbullying
  • internet addiction
  • access to information
  • professional development
  • privacy concerns
  • educational resources
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