In recent years, young people in many countries choose to live by themselves. What are the reasons and is it positive or negative for the development of the society.

Nowadays many teenagers in many nations decide to live independently and the main reason for

this

phenomenon is that they want to be free from their parent's restrictions and rules. Some argue that

this

is a positive development because the child will gain the experience of how to live independently, some would argue that it has a negative

impact

on the adolescent because they still need supervision from the adult to consider the consequence of their action. On one hand, living without their family allows young people can live independently and they can choose what kind of life they want to live. They learn how to make a decision and get the consequence of every action and they gain the lesson from their own live experience.

For instance

, many people from European countries travel to Indonesia by themselves after they turn 18 years old,

while

most Indonesian young people still need to be accompanied by adults when they go to other countries or even

go to

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other islands in Indonesia.

On the other hand

, living independently at an early age will make young children lose control of their lives because they don't know the

impact

of the actions they take and they still need supervision from their parents.

For example

, many teenagers in Jakarta who live without their parents did not finish their education and most of them become

a criminals

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. In conclusion, even though living independently has a positive

impact

on teenagers

but

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the negative

impact

outweighs the positive development.