You are having a graduation party next Saturday night. You have invited 50 people to celebrate at an outdoor barbecue evening, which may continue into late into the night. Write a letter to your elderly neighbour. In your letter:  explain what will be happening  offer your apologies in advance  invite her to join the celebration

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Dear Charlie, I have not seen you for a

while

since the

last

party that we enjoyed together at your home. I hope you have been well because your son told me that you felt unwell

last

week. I am writing to you because my son is having a graduation at ECU next Saturday the 17th of July, and I prefer that you are

awareof

Correct your spelling

aware of

the pool party. The party will start at 8:00 pm and finish at 12:30 am on Sunday. My husband will bring some canapes for sharing with our family and relatives.

Besides

, we hire a DJ to play techno music for them as well.

While

I understand that

this

celebration will affect the tranquility of the neighbourhood, I prefer to apology in advance

due to

noisy or uncomfortable situation. I promise that we will be on the right behaviour.

However

, I would

therefore

like to extend an invitation to you and your family as well because we have been neighbour since 2001. I hope you will consider my request, and please do not hesitate to contact me to discuss

this

matter

further

. Your sincerely, Claudia Patino

Submitted by klaudia2301 on Thu May 23 2024

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suitable writing tone

Ensure consistency in language and tone throughout the letter.

complete response

Check for grammatical errors and ensure the correct use of prepositions and articles.

complete response

Effectively conveyed the purpose of the letter.

greeting and closing

Greeting and closing are appropriate and polite.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Linking words
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Word repetition
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

190 words

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