You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The graph below shows four countries of residence of overseas students in Australia. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The graph below shows four countries of residence of overseas students in Australia.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The graph presented portrays four countries of residence of overseas
students
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in Australia.
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, it can be clearly seen that among the four countries,
students
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choose Indonesia more often. In 1982 the only country in which
students
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attended university was
Malaysia
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at around 8000 of all the
students
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overseas at that time.
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count stayed more or less constant until 1990 when it suddenly increased to 20000
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in
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8 year
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period until 1998. In 1984 some Australian residents started education in Indonesia. The student count in
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country kept growing, overtook Hong Kong,
Malaysia
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and Singapore in 1994 and ultimately reached the climax of around 26000
students
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in 1998. During the following 2 years until
2000
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2000,
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this
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number
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dropped slightly to around 24000. Another similar tendency can be seen in Hong Kong, where the
number
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of
students
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exploded in a period of one year from none to 5 thousand
students
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in 1987. Just like in
Indonesia
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Indonesia,
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number
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kept rising in the following years peaking at 20000 undergraduates in 1997.
Malaysia
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started receiving
students
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from Australia in 1988(later than any of the four countries). The
number
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of
students
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in
Malaysia
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,
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, did not experience any decline and
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growing ever since. Reaching just below 20000 undergraduates in 2000.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words students, malaysia, number with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • overseas students
  • country of residence
  • main features
  • comparison
  • patterns
  • trends
  • economic factors
  • education quality
  • cultural ties
  • shift
  • anomalies
  • data
  • highest number
  • lowest number
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