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The graph below shows different sources of air pollutants in the UK from 1990 to 2005. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The graph below shows different sources of air pollutants in the UK from 1990 to 2005. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
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The given line chart illustrates distinct sources of
air
 pollutants in the UK within 15 years between 1990 and 2005. Looking from an
overall
 perspective, it is readily apparent that the graph shows two main different trends; the
air
 pollution from industry and household sources had decreased,
while
from
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the transport had an opposite trend. Regarding the UK, the total
air
pollutant
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 declined slightly from about 7
million
tonnes
 in 1990 to
lower
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less
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 than 4
million
tonnes
 in 2005.
Also
that
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the
overall
 direction of
the
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air
 pollution in industry and households
are
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is
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 quite the same. In the transport source,
in contrast
,
the
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air
 pollution experienced an insignificant jump from around 1
million
tonnes
 to 1.5
million
tonnes
 in the
15-years
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15-year
 period.
However
, in 2002 and 2005
of
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 transport, industry and households, the trends became so stable that the line in total
air
 pollutants fluctuated from what it should be.
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Vocabulary: The word "trends" was used 3 times.
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