Research shows that overeating can be just as harmful as smoking. Thus the advertising of certain food products should be banned, as cigar is banned in many countries. Do you agree or disagree?

Many research have shown that overeating

causes

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many health issues as smoking does and the public argues that it is necessary to ban some

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ads

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to prevent

people

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from consuming it.

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, there are individuals who say it is unnecessary to ban

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ads

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because

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only buy it at

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but to keep consuming it, it requires the

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of the

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. In my perspective, I wholeheartedly disagree with banning certain

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the fact that

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nutrition and health

organization

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organizations

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would not allow the

food

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to be distributed if it is harmful in the

first

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place.

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, health issues from overeating have nothing to do with the

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because overeating means that the individual has no self-control in their diet. Interesting

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would influence

people

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to buy goods,

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, it requires the

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and the taste of the

food

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to be able to retain consumers to keep consuming it.

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, in Indonesia, there

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a lot of carbonate drink brands that are advertised on television yet

people

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are only

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interested

in buying it at

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and

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buying another product that has better taste and

quality

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. Within

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fact, it is proven that

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advertising does not cause overeating.

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, the

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of overeating and smoking are not comparable because

people

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diagnosed with obesity have various

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as psychological issues and not because they consume certain

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foods

food

that are harmful.

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, there is an organization that observes the ingredients of foods and

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and if the

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fail in

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testing

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it will not allowed to distribute. Because of that, it is unnecessary to ban

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in advertising,

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, the

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management could help the consumer to be selective by giving the nutrition information in the

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.

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,

baning

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certain

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food

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foods

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in advertising is not

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necessary

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some facts.

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, continuously consuming certain foods depends on the

quality

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of the

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and

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only influence

people

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at their

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buy.

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, overeating has many

causes

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and is influenced by

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playing small portions of it, so

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, I disagree with banning certain foods in order to prevent overeating.