The table below shows the worldwide market share of the notebook computer market for manufacturers in the years 2006, 2007, and 2014

The table below shows the worldwide market share of the notebook computer market for manufacturers in the years 2006, 2007, and 2014
The table illustrates the global sales of 6
the
Change preposition
of the
show examples
most purchasable (and other) laptop companies in per
cent
, in 2006, 2007, and 2014.
Overall
, HP, Dell, and Toshiba units increased,
while
other manufacturers' value in the market decreased; and Samsung, Lenovo, and Fujitsu experienced a fluctuation during the given period.
To begin
with, HP corporation had started with the highest rate of 31.4 per
cent
in 2006 and finished at 34.25 in 2014 -- which is only 0.25 per
cent
higher than the previous year in the table -- saving its rating during the whole period. Despite the fact that Dell showed big improvement starting from 16.6 digits, following 20.2 and 26.12 in 2007 and 2014 respectively, it was not the most purchasable PC notebook. Toshiba's sales increase was not as remarkable as Dell's, differencing in only about 2 digits.
In contrast
, other firms' production declined significantly, and the difference from the first unit (22.8) was almost 15 per
cent
in the end.
Finally
, businesses like Samsung, Lenovo, and Fujitsu have been observing shifts in their own sales.
Submitted by zakirova7ez3 on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words cent with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
What to do next:
Look at other essays: