The graph and chart give information on the aveage daily maximum and minimum temperature in degrees Celsius and the average number of days with rainfall each month for two Australian cities

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The presented diagrams depict the median percentages of temperatures and the mean ratios of rainy days, which are situated in two states of Australia, which have fluctuated over the one observed year.

Overall

, the average daily temperatures changed

as well as

the average number of days with rainfall:

moreover

, both charts indicated the same trend from January to December.

Initially

, Brisbane and Canberra had the highest points of heat level at 27 Celsius in the first month,

then

slowly decreased and touched the lowest between

June-July

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June and July

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Furthermore

, the Celsius rates started to rise in August,

then

peaked at the maximum percentages in the

last

month of the year.

Conversely

, the ratios of rainy weather in the second observed town had the opposite number from the bar chart of the first observed area.

In addition

, when the capital of Australia rained like cats and dogs in the beginning,

hence

, the other states had dry conditions at the same time.

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The graph and chart give information on the aveage daily maximum and minimum temperature in degrees Celsius and the average number of days with rainfall each month for two Australian cities

Today our communications, medicine and transport systems all depend on computer technology. Our reliance on computer technology in these fields has created a dangerous situation. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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In many countries, paying for things using mobile phone app is becoming increasingly common. Does these development have more advantages or disadvantages?

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