with ease of e books comes the decline in paper books. some people see this as a good forward while others do not. what are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend
Introduction to
the
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books
has showed
a degradation of paper Wrong verb form
shown
book
purchases, this
change in trend
has proven good while
other opposes this
. I would like to present my views on this
uprising of Ebooks with its pros and cons.
On the one hand, E-books
have several merits. Firstly
, this
trend
is beneficial for the environment as it leads to reduced deforestation at a significant rate. Adding to it, these virtual books
are certainly affordable while
compared with the cost expense. Correct word choice
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Secondly
, this
reduces a consumer's book
handling and maintenance as thousands of books
can be saved in a single folder. Thirdly
, this
allows us to carry many books
at the same time and it does not require additional stationery to make notes.
On the other hand
, this
trend
is considered beneficial and there is no denying it but it comes with some disadvantages that could not
be avoided. Wrong verb form
cannot
For instance
, this
is decreasing our tactile experience and sensation of enjoying a new book
with its papery smell. The enjoyment they used to receive from starting a new book
as the begining
of something new & the smell. A sense of satisfaction Correct your spelling
beginning
while
ending a book
is also
fading. On the contrary
to this
trend
, it is also
limited access to the poor community who cannot afford a luxury like this
technology, which results in creating a negative impact on the local communities.
In conclusion, E-Books
have plenty of perks and its beneficial for the environment. However
, people are getting disconnected from the connection of books
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