The table below shows local catches and imports of fresh fish into Perth, Australia for the years 2004 - 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below shows local catches and imports of fresh fish into Perth, Australia for the years 2004 - 2014.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The table illustrates the amount of
fish
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caught and imported between 2004 and 2014 in Perth, Australia.
Overall
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, there is a significant escalation in the quantity of
fish
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caught locally and the
fish
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imported to Perth over the 10 years.
However
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, the increase was not steady. To specify, the local
fish
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trapped and the
fish
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brought from abroad fluctuated year by year with a general surge. The
fish
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caught locally elevated from 2677.7
tons
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in 2004 to 5031.9
tons
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in 2014,
however
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, the highest amount of
fish
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caught was in 2008 reaching 8236.2
tons
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.
On the other hand
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, the rise in imported over the 10-year period was not as great as local
fish
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, with it only increasing to 782.7
tons
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from 464.5
tons
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.
As a consequence
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of the expansion in local
fish
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and imported
fish
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, there is a rise in the total
fish
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which has improved from 3142.2
tons
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in 2004 to 5814.7
tons
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in 2014.
On the contrary
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to local
fish
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, the highest amounts of
fish
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imported and total
fish
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was
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in 2010 reaching 1203.7
tons
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and 8035.1
tons
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respectively.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however".
Vocabulary: Replace the words fish, tons with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "rise" was used 2 times.
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