The table below shows local catches and imports of fresh fish into Perth, Australia for the years 2004 - 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The table illustrates the amount of
fish
caught and imported between 2004 and 2014 in Perth, Australia.
Overall
, there is a significant escalation in the quantity of fish
caught locally and the fish
imported to Perth over the 10 years. However
, the increase was not steady. To specify, the local fish
trapped and the fish
brought from abroad fluctuated year by year with a general surge.
The fish
caught locally elevated from 2677.7 tons
in 2004 to 5031.9 tons
in 2014, however
, the highest amount of fish
caught was in 2008 reaching 8236.2 tons
.
On the other hand
, the rise in imported over the 10-year period was not as great as local fish
, with it only increasing to 782.7 tons
from 464.5 tons
. As a consequence
of the expansion in local fish
and imported fish
, there is a rise in the total fish
which has improved from 3142.2 tons
in 2004 to 5814.7 tons
in 2014. On the contrary
to local fish
, the highest amounts of fish
imported and total fish
was
in 2010 reaching 1203.7 Correct subject-verb agreement
were
tons
and 8035.1 tons
respectively.Submitted by Mangalakumaran.sangeetha on
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