The diagram below shows how the Australian Bureau of Meteorology collects up- to-the-minute information on the weather in order to produce reliable forecasts.

The diagram below shows how the Australian Bureau of Meteorology collects up- to-the-minute information on the weather in order to produce reliable forecasts.
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The provided diagram illustrates the way or process of the Australian Bureau of
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to obtain quick weather information in order to manufacture reliable forecasts.
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, it can be seen that there were 3 different
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involved in every process. First of all, meteorology institutions set three different
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in order to obtain data. The incoming information can be received from
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in outer space, radar at the top of folks' houses and seaside drifting buoys. The data which come from every
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will be continued to the analysis and forecasting stage.
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process will be executed with the assistance of documentation forms from each
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namely satellite photo, radar screen and synoptic chart.
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, all the records will be entered into the computer as a way to prepare the broadcast. If the experts in the institution already finished the preparation broadcast, the information will be sent through several
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as newsreaders on television, radio and recorded announcements.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words media with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "data" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "information" was used 3 times.
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