IELTS Writing Correction Service /
Writing Samples /
Band 7.5

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You have just moved into a new home and are planning to hold a party. You are worried that the noise may disturb your neighbour. Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter ● introduce yourself ● describe your plans for the party ● invite your neighbour to come You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear ................. , You should write at least 150 words.

#minutes #home #party #noise #neighbour #plans #addresses
Dear Vikash, I hope you are doing well, let me introduce myself, I am Shivam Kumar, and I have just moved into your neighbourhood. I want to invite you to the party that I have hosted
this
 weekend. As you know, it is essential to have a get-together at your new house with your friends, family, and especially new neighbours. At
this
 party, there will be food, drinks, and many activities
such
 as dance and games that will entertain us for the whole night.
However
, it is
also
 expected that there will be some noise as well that can disturb you, and I hope you don't mind that. So I am inviting you to be my guest so we can avoid that disturbance. And at
this
 gathering, we can know each other very well and have fun. and we can be on good terms without any problem. I hope to see you soon, Shivam.
Submitted by MK on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

coherence cohesion
Try to avoid repetitive phrases and structures. For example, instead of repeating 'and' in the closing paragraph, it can be rephrased for better clarity.
task achievement
Ensure your tone remains consistently polite and respectful throughout the letter, especially when mentioning potential disturbances.
task achievement
You have provided a clear and complete response to the task, covering all necessary points.
coherence cohesion
Your letter has a logical structure with a clear introduction, body, and closing, making it easy to follow.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

Discover more tips in The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »— a book that's free for 🚀 Premium users.

What to do next:
Look at other essays: