Space exploration has been an ongoing field of research in the 21st century. What are the advantages and disadvantages of exploring space? Do you agree that its advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

Space

exploration

has been one of the outstanding outcomes of science and

technology

advancements, and

this

has been going on since the past century. In my perspective,

this

advancement has more advantages and fewer drawbacks. On the one hand, the amount spent on exploring

outerspace

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outer space

can be

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exorbitant

. To elaborate, since

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and costumes are sophisticated and require

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of high

technology

, the machinery and the labour needed to design them

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extortionate;

such

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of funds could be spent

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diluting more pressing problems.

For example

, higher funds can be expended on addressing poverty and health concerns in different regions of countries.

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,

instead

of squandering public funds on

space

missions, governments should use the amount to improve the

economical

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and health standards of citizens.

On the other hand

, numerous scientific and

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breakthroughs can stem from exploring

space

.

In other words

, acclimatizing to solar energy and zero gravity, scientists and astronomers have

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introduced several inventions, that have facilitated

commonpeople

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common people

in their daily chores.

For instance

, owing to the

exploration

of

space

,

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surfaced which

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provided wifi and internet services globally, leading to improved means of communication

as well as

precise forecasting of storms and hurricanes, saving millions of lives.

Thus

, exploring

space

has accounted for several scientific inventions.

Furthermore

,

space

exploration

may help discover other habitable

celesstial

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celestial

bodies. To explain,

due to

overpopulation and the subsequent overexploitation of natural resources, the earth might soon become depleted of resources that necessitate sustainability.

However

, exploring

outerspace

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outer space

can alleviate

this

concern. To exemplify,

according to

the recent expedition to

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Mars,

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traces of water reservoirs have been discovered on

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Mars, which indicates a possibility of long-term sustainability.

Hence

,

space

exploration

may probably provide chances

of extracting

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resources from other planets in case the

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runs out of them. In conclusion, admittedly,

exploration

of

space

can be quite costly,

nevertheless

, the introduction of modern

technology

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discovering

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other

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habitable planets provide more advantages.