Your car insurance company has told you that they are going to increase the amount you have to pay in insurance for your car each month. You are not happy about this. Write a letter to your insurance company. In your letter explain •Why you are writing to them •Why you think the insurance should not be increased •What you want them to do
Dear Sir or Madam
I would like to express my dissatisfaction
due to
your latest announcement about increasing my car insurance
monthly.
If you check my records, you will be informed that I have been your client for nearly eight years. A reasonable increase
once a year is acceptable, as you did every year, but 30
% Correct article usage
a 30
increase
after your regular annual increase
is not acceptable , particularly for your faithful clients.
As far as I am concerned, the governmental insurance
company should not enhance their price for the customers who never use their insurance
. The majority of people just extend their car insurance
because of severe regulations and never use it.
I would like to request that you remove the increase
from my account or I will change my insurance
and contract with a company where the price is affordable for me.
I look forward to receiving your response.
Yours faithfully,
Negar SedighSubmitted by Negar_seddigh on
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single idea per paragraph
Try to make your paragraphs more distinct by focusing on a single idea per paragraph. This will help in organizing your thoughts better.
complete response
Consider explaining a bit more about why a 30% increase is particularly unreasonable, perhaps with comparisons or additional context.
complete response
Your letter addresses the prompt effectively and provides clear reasons why the insurance should not be increased.
suitable writing tone
The tone of the letter is formal and polite, which is appropriate for this context.
logical structure
The logical structure of the letter is clear, with a well-defined introduction, body, and conclusion.
greeting and closing
Your closing statement is polite and indicates what action you would like to be taken, which strengthens your argument.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite