The table and charts below give information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one area of Britain. The table shows where the money came from and the chars show how it was distributed.
The table and chart illustrate the data of the
budget
in 2017 and 2018, putting on police in one area of Britain. The table displays the sources
of the money and the charts present the proportion of the budget
spent on each category.
The general overview is that among the allocation sources
, the National Government was the maximum budget
over the period of time. Furthermore
, most of the money was spent on offices and staff salaries.
It can be seen that the money came from the national government the most, responsible for 175.5m, followed by local taxes and other sources
(eg grants) with the figure being 91.2m and 38m respectively in 2017. In 2018, the order of sources
remained stable, yet slightly increasing of
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budget
for each source. The total budget
increased from 304.7m in 2017 to 318.6m in 2018.
Moving on to the spending of the police budget
each year. In 2017, salaries took the major part, occupied by
75%, followed by spending on building Change preposition
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and
transportation, and technology with figures Correct word choice
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17
% and 8% respectively. In the following year, there was spending on salaries lower by 6%. Change preposition
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While
spending on building and transportation equal the last
record and spending on technology rose by 6%.Submitted by pnakasont on
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