The bar chart compares the total number of vehicles per one thousand people in China who owns a car in the years 1987 to 1999.

The bar chart compares the total number of vehicles per one thousand people in China who owns a car in the years 1987 to 1999.
The bar graph shows the sum of the automobile users by each thousand residents in mainland China between 1987 and 1999.
Overall
,
it is clear that
the trend was increasing dramatically during the twelve-year period. Looking at the chart more closely, one can see that in 1987, the
number
of car owners was only about 25 people in a thousand, but in 1999 it was around four hundred
and
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Chinese who had cars. In these 12 years, the
number
of people who drive cars gained approximately three hundred and ninety in a thousand. That was a very big improvement. Every four years, the
number
almost doubled. From 1995 to 1999, the
number
of cars grew to more than 200. In the year 1993, the figure just ascended slightly, and I guess it was gained probably fifteen. After that every two years, the
number
of increase was nearly two hundred.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • bar chart
  • comparative data
  • vehicle ownership
  • per 1000 people
  • economic growth
  • rising income
  • year-on-year increase
  • significant jumps
  • data points
  • urbanization
  • industrialization
  • infrastructural impact
  • environmental impact
  • plateau
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