Some believe that the government should not be responsible for combating environmental issues that the international companies should take the mantle. Discuss both sides and give your opinion?
There are
people
Use synonyms
that
Correct pronoun usage
who
belive
environmental issues are not the Correct your spelling
believe
government
's responsibility and Use synonyms
the
international Correct determiner usage
that
companies
should take a step Use synonyms
to
it. In Change preposition
toward
this
Linking Words
essay
we will discuss both perspectives before Add a comma
essay,
conclude
it.
On the one hand, some Change the verb form
concluding
people
argue that only the Use synonyms
government
who responsible for environmental issues in their countries. The Use synonyms
government
have Use synonyms
responsibility
to make Add an article
a responsibility
the responsibility
regulation
about Fix the agreement mistake
regulations
Use synonyms
environment
and take preventive ways to Add an article
the environment
avoid
Verb problem
prevent
people
from damaging the Use synonyms
environment
Use synonyms
such
as Linking Words
prohibited
deforestry, Wrong verb form
prohibiting
avoid
Wrong verb form
avoiding
wildfire
and Fix the agreement mistake
wildfires
save
biodiversity. Wrong verb form
saving
Moreover
, the Linking Words
government
Use synonyms
Linking Words
also
responsible Add a missing verb
is also
to overcome
the Change preposition
for overcoming
damages
Fix the agreement mistake
damage
in
the Change preposition
to
environment
and Use synonyms
educate
Wrong verb form
educating
people
to Use synonyms
perserve
Correct your spelling
preserve
the
nature.
Correct article usage
apply
On the other hand
, many international Linking Words
companies
build their factories in a foreign country and contribute to the Use synonyms
pollutions
and Fix the agreement mistake
pollution
Use synonyms
environment
Replace the word
environmental
damages
in other countries. It is Fix the agreement mistake
damage
undoudtedly
that some international Correct your spelling
undoubtedly
companies
damage Use synonyms
the
nature to open their lands and mines. Correct article usage
apply
For instance
, in Papua, Indonesia, there are many mining Linking Words
companies
that open their mines by deforestry and Use synonyms
abondon
it once they Correct your spelling
abandon
abandoned
finished
. These irresponsible ways Wrong verb form
finish
are
cause Unnecessary verb
apply
many
harm Correct quantifier usage
much
for
Change preposition
to
the
nature and it is a necessity for the company to take Correct article usage
apply
a
part in handling Correct article usage
apply
Use synonyms
environment
issues.
Replace the word
environmental
To conclude
, both the Linking Words
government
and international Use synonyms
companies
that open their factories in these countries should be responsible for Use synonyms
Use synonyms
environment
. Add an article
the environment
This
is Linking Words
due to
the fact that Linking Words
the
international Correct article usage
apply
companies
often cause Use synonyms
damages
Fix the agreement mistake
damage
in
Change preposition
to
foreign
Add an article
a foreign
country
and Fix the agreement mistake
countries
abondon
the lands.Correct your spelling
abandon
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