You and your family are planning to spend a weekend at a seaside hotel. Write a letter to the hotel, making the arrangements. In your letter tell them when you will be arriving and leaving explain what type of rooms you would like, and ask how much the weekend will cost ask about activities and places of interest near the hotel
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to you to inquire about the
room
availability at the seaside hotel for the upcoming weekend, I'm planning for Use synonyms
three days
family holiday trip, and looking for an en-suite Replace the word
a three-day
room
accommodation for three guests Use synonyms
having
2 adults and 1 kid.
We will be coming around 10:30 AM and have a return flight at 11:00 AM, so will be checking out around 8 AM on 5th January, So, Kindly confirm, if early check-in will be possible. Unnecessary verb
apply
Also
, help to share the per day charges inclusive of breakfast for the Linking Words
overall
stay. I would prefer the high-rise en-suite Linking Words
room
Use synonyms
along with
an open balcony, as we have seen some of the promotional advertisements have mesmerising balcony views.
It would be great if you could Linking Words
also
assist us in sharing the nearby impressive attractions, especially beaches, local shops and activities for kids.
Kindly assist in confirming the above Linking Words
room
reservation inquiry and share the requested details.
Thank you for your time and great assistance.
Best Regards,
ABCUse synonyms
Submitted by pskhandelwal13 on
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
task achievement
Ensure that all details, like specific dates, are clearly mentioned to avoid confusion.
coherence cohesion
Check for grammatical errors such as sentence structure to enhance coherence.
task achievement
The letter is polite and addresses all the points required by the task.
coherence cohesion
Clear paragraphs with single ideas make the letter easy to follow.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite