The diagram shows how fruit is canned.

The diagram shows how fruit is canned.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The diagram shows how fruit is canned.
The picture illustrates the
process
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of canning fruit.
Overall
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, there are 14 stages in the
process
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, commencing with the hand-picking of fruit and culminating with the final products being transported to supermarkets or customers. AT THE BEGINNING OF THE
PROCESS
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,
fruits
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are harvested/ picked by hand, AFTER WHICH they are transported by trucks to factories where they are washed on conveyor belts.
Subsequently
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, BEFORE being stored at low temperatures, washed
fruits
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are checked to determine their quality.
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, AFTER being weighted and graded into different categories based on their weight,
fruits
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are peeled, deseeded, and
then
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sliced into smaller pieces. THE
PROCESS
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CONTINUES WITH smaller chunks of
fruits
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being packed/ put into tin cans, followed by the sealing stage.
Next,
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ONCE cans of
fruits
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are cooked and sterilized under high heat to remove unwanted bacteria, they are labelled. AT THE FINAL STAGE OF THE
PROCESS
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, sterilized cans are kept in storage, prior to being delivered/ shipped to wholesalers and retailers for sale.

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