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The table below gives information on consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002.

The table below gives information on consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002.
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The table depicts how much money was spent on various goods in
Ireland
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, Italy,
Spain
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,
Sweden
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 and
Turkey
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 in 2002. It is noticeable that
Turkey
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 was by far the most widespread nation in
consumer
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 expenditure in comparison to the other countries. Notably, the percentage of
consumer
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 spending on food/ drinks/ tobacco was higher than that on clothing/ footwear and leisure/ education. As can be seen from the chart, the proportion of
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 spending in
Turkey
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 held the lion’s share, accounting for 32,14%, followed by 28,91% in
Ireland
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. The figures for Italy,
Spain
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 and
Sweden
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 were comparatively parallel, with 16,36%, 18,80% and 15,77% respectively. There was almost 9,00% of
consumer
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 expenditure on clothing/ footwear in Italy, which was 3,6% lower than the statistics for
Sweden
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,
while
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Ireland
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,
Spain
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, and
Turkey
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 spent clothing/ footwear was approximately similar, with respective numbers being 6,43%, 6,51% and 6,63% For leisure and education, 4,35% of
consumer
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 spending came from
Turkey
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, hitting the highest point in the group, compared to the level of
Ireland
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, Italy and
Sweden
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, with 2,21%, 3,20%, and 3,22% in turn, whilst the lowest rate belonged to
Spain
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, reaching about 1,98%

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Vocabulary: Replace the words ireland, spain, sweden, turkey, consumer with synonyms.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • consumer spending
  • items
  • countries
  • comparison
  • overview
  • table
  • data
  • information
  • proportion
  • percentage
  • figures
  • categories
  • expenditure
  • purchases
  • spending habits
  • trends
  • average
  • highest
  • lowest
  • variation
  • pattern
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