The graph below shows the number of tourists visting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where revelant.
Demonstrated in the given line graph is the
number
of Use synonyms
visitors
who Use synonyms
traveled
to an Change the spelling
travelled
island
in the Caribbean between 2010 and 2017.
Use synonyms
Overall
, it can be observed that the total Linking Words
number
of Use synonyms
visitors
to the Caribbean Use synonyms
island
saw an increase throughout the Use synonyms
period
. Use synonyms
Additionally
, the majority of Linking Words
tourists
stayed on the Use synonyms
island
rather than on cruise Use synonyms
ships
most of the time, Use synonyms
however
, it was surpassed by those who stayed on the Linking Words
ships
Use synonyms
at the end
of the Linking Words
period
.
Beginning with the first half of the Use synonyms
period
, where there were 1 Use synonyms
million
Use synonyms
visitors
in total who Use synonyms
traveled
to the Caribbean Change the spelling
travelled
island
in 2010, including about 0.75 Use synonyms
million
Use synonyms
tourists
who stayed on the Use synonyms
island
, Use synonyms
while
just about 0.25 Linking Words
million
Use synonyms
ones
preferred the cruise Correct pronoun usage
apply
ships
. In the following year, the Use synonyms
number
of Use synonyms
visitors
staying on the Use synonyms
island
remained constant, Use synonyms
however
, those staying on cruise Linking Words
ships
saw an increase to 0.5 Use synonyms
million
. Regarding the Use synonyms
number
of Use synonyms
tourists
who chose to stay on the Use synonyms
island
, it rose to approximately 1.8 Use synonyms
million
and 1.5 Use synonyms
million
in 2012 and 2013, respectively before Use synonyms
leveling
off Change the spelling
levelling
until
2015. Meanwhile, those who preferred staying on cruises saw a steady increase to 1 Change preposition
in
million
in 2014 after experiencing a drop to roughly 0.25 Use synonyms
million
in 2012.
Shifting Use synonyms
focus
to the remaining half of the Add an article
the focus
period
, after remaining constant, the Use synonyms
number
of Use synonyms
visitors
witnessed a decline to around 0.75 Use synonyms
million
in 2016 Use synonyms
then
recovered to 1.5 Linking Words
million
in the Use synonyms
last
year. Linking Words
By contrast
, there was a steady rise in the Linking Words
number
of Use synonyms
tourists
, making it end at a peak of 2 Use synonyms
million
in 2017.Use synonyms
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