The graph below shows the number of tourists visting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where revelant.

The graph below shows the number of tourists visting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017.

Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where revelant.
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Demonstrated in the given line graph is the
number
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of
visitors
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who
traveled
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travelled
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to an
island
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in the Caribbean between 2010 and 2017.
Overall
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, it can be observed that the total
number
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of
visitors
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to the Caribbean
island
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saw an increase throughout the
period
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.
Additionally
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, the majority of
tourists
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stayed on the
island
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rather than on cruise
ships
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most of the time,
however
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, it was surpassed by those who stayed on the
ships
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at the end
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of the
period
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. Beginning with the first half of the
period
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, where there were 1
million
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visitors
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in total who
traveled
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travelled
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to the Caribbean
island
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in 2010, including about 0.75
million
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tourists
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who stayed on the
island
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,
while
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just about 0.25
million
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ones
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preferred the cruise
ships
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. In the following year, the
number
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of
visitors
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staying on the
island
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remained constant,
however
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, those staying on cruise
ships
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saw an increase to 0.5
million
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. Regarding the
number
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of
tourists
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who chose to stay on the
island
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, it rose to approximately 1.8
million
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and 1.5
million
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in 2012 and 2013, respectively before
leveling
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off
until
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in
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2015. Meanwhile, those who preferred staying on cruises saw a steady increase to 1
million
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in 2014 after experiencing a drop to roughly 0.25
million
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in 2012. Shifting
focus
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to the remaining half of the
period
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, after remaining constant, the
number
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of
visitors
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witnessed a decline to around 0.75
million
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in 2016
then
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recovered to 1.5
million
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in the
last
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year.
By contrast
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, there was a steady rise in the
number
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of
tourists
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, making it end at a peak of 2
million
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in 2017.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however".
Introduction: The introduction is missing.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words number, visitors, island, period, tourists, ships, million with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 6 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "stayed" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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