The graph below shows the population of a particular country by age group starting in 1960 and including a forecast to 2040.

The graph below shows the population of a particular country by age group starting in 1960 and including a forecast to 2040.
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The line graph illustrates the percentage of population in the country by three different age groups between 1960 and 2040.
Overall
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, It can be seen that older
people
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that are 65
years
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old or more were increased over the 80-year period.
Whereas
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, The population of
people
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who are 0-14 and 15-64
years
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old declined. On the one hand, citizens that are younger
people
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between 0 and 14
years
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old began at around 17% in 1960 and slightly decreased to 10% in 2040.
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,
people
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in the 15-64 age groups fluctuated until 1990, after that, the number of
people
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declined to roughly 45% in 2040.
On the other hand
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, the elderly
people
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around 65
years
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or more remained stable until 1970,
then
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jumped significantly and have the same percentage of the population as
people
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in 15-64
years
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in 2040.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words people, years with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "declined" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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