this diagram shows the brick manufactureing process

the

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diagram

depict

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depicts

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brick producing

process

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overall

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process

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the process

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consist

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of seven

stotages

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stages

storages

, which begin with digging in clay and finish with

delivery

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the delivery

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stage.

initially

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,some

specefic

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specific

vehicle dig clay on the ground, afterwards,

materails

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materials

puring on the roller from

metal

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a metal

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grid next

which

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to which

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materials grid

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goes

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through mould

either

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wire cultter to alter

bricks

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with

help

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the help

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sand

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of sand

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plus

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and

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water.

Following

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this

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bricks

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dry in

oven

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for 24 to 48 hours.Next

bricks

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undergo some special

process

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for heating

this

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process

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start

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with moderate

temprature

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temperature

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then

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and then

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it's

rise

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rises

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afterwards

bricks

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cooling

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for 48 to 72 hours.

then

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bricks

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ready

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are ready

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for packaging and ultimately

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bricks

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brick

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packs go to vehicles for delivery.

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May 26, 2024

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

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106 words

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