The charts give information about honey-bee colonies and honey production in the US Summerise the information about honey-bee colonies and honey production by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

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The line graphs illustrate the number of honey-bee colonies in millions and the amount of honey produced in the US from 1970 and 2010.

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it is clear that

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the nests for bees and honey manufacturing declined gradually over

this

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period except for the minor fluctuations in 1980 for bee houses and in 1990 for the produce. The bee-keeping was more popular earlier in 1970 when the number of nests was 4 million.It rose marginally by 0.2 million to reach its peak in the next ten years and

then

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followed a steady downward trend to come down to less than half of its initial value of 1970.The maximum decrement was seen between 1990-2000 when it fell by 1 million.

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, honey production followed a slightly different pattern.It started at its highest level of 130000 tonne.Over the next decade. there was a significant drop in its manufacturing by 20000 tonnes.

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this

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figure jumped in the next decade by ten thousand

in contrast

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to the colonies which had declined during

this

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period.Afterwards, the figures dropped drastically to reach a low of 70000 tonnes in 2010 which was almost half of its initial value in 1970.

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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "declined" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "reach" was used 2 times.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

196 words

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The charts give information about honey-bee colonies and honey production in the US Summerise the information about honey-bee colonies and honey production by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

Some people believe that everyone has a right to have access to university education that government should make it free for all students no matter what financial background they have. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Many claim that tha fast food industry has a negative effect on the environment, eating habits, and families. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

It is better to buy just a few expensive clothes, rather than lots of cheaper clothes. Do you agree or disagree?

Some people think that using mobile phones and computers has a negative effect on young people's reading and writing skills. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Many people believe that a country’s wealth is dependant on the health of its citizens. Other people argue that education is a better indicator of a nation’s wealth and well-being. What is your opinion? What are some other factors that contribute to the growth and prosperity of a country?