The charts below show the reasons of public complaints from 4 major cities around the globe.

The charts below show the reasons of public complaints from 4 major cities around the globe.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The charts below show the reasons of public complaints from 4 major cities around the globe.
The given graphs illustrate the amount of reason from residents who were unsatisfied in 4 specific cities.
Overall
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, it can be seen that complaining about traffic had the highest rates in all cities, except for New
Orleans
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, which had a lot of noise complaints.
Additionally
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, littering was the reason had the lowest votes in four urban areas. Looking at the figures for
further
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details, Vegas had 56% of people unsatisfied with traffic nearly two times higher than New
Orleans
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at 27%, making
this
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the most significant difference,
while
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Florence and Sydney had just 32% and 55%, respectively. Regarding
to
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apply
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New
Orleans
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, the most complaints about noise at 55%, meanwhile, other cities just ranged from 20% to 28%. Returning to the lower rates, in Florence, the number of housing costs reason
at
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20% more than others which varied from 12% to 15%.  Similar to litter in Florence at 8% which was doubled than the rates in Vegas and New
Orleans
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at the same point at 4%,
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there was 5% of residents complaining about litter in Sydney.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words orleans with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 3 times.
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