Topic: The graph shows the average carbon emissions per person in four countries between 1967 and 2007.
The supplied line graph illustrates how much carbon dioxide was produced by each person from 4 countries between 1967 and 2007.
Overall
, the graph appropriates 4 countries with both Sweden and the United Kingdom with a downtrend while
two lines such
Portugal and Italy with an uptrend.
As can be seen, a remarkable change occurred in Sweden from 8.4% in 1967 to approximately 4.5% in 2017; Correct quantifier usage
apply
however
, it reached 10.2% in 1997. Moreover
, the average carbon dioxide in the United Kingdom was near 10.5% in the first year which was
declined to 8.4% in the end.
It is clearly shown that Portugal's line started at 1.5% and reached 4.5% in 1997, Unnecessary verb
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then
it steadily passed until the last
year. Similarly
, the Production of CO2 in Italy experienced the same pattern. In other words
, it was 4.1% in 1997 and increased to nearly 8% in 1997, then
it steadily passed until 2007.Submitted by abhari1997 on
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